Sumo Steve
Jobber
Knows the owner personally. BOOYAH
Posts: 102
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My RP
Sept 12, 2006 18:48:02 GMT -5
Post by Sumo Steve on Sept 12, 2006 18:48:02 GMT -5
How did y'all like my RP this week? I thought I'd try something with a view, so there you go! Btw, no offense was intended towards any Canadians whatsoever and I have never been to Canada so I wouldn't know if they suck. It was just for the sake of wreslting/RPing. ;D
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My RP
Sept 12, 2006 21:04:03 GMT -5
Post by "Mr. W" Walter Loufie on Sept 12, 2006 21:04:03 GMT -5
Can definately tell that it was just used to get into Storms head (characterwise) . I would just suggeest to reread it a little more. Some punctuation things in their that could be fixed. It would definately help make your RP's run a lot smoother. Other than that, I can definately see imporvement
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